By Zod, you've gotten incredibly good! It feels like just yesterday you were asking me about lineweights and inking techniques and now you're busting out work of this polished calibur. Don't say this often but color me seriously impressed!
Great take on the panel descriptions and very expressive emoting on Quinn's face. Good flow and easy to understand, just solid work especially considering everything you were dealing with while doing it. There are some very minor issues peppered here and there but most folks won't catch 'em or care; they're so minimal and it's just such a well done page given the material.
Best of luck with it. If nothing else this is a strong addition to your portfolio and I can only wonder where you'll go from here with your work coming along as nicely as this. Can't wait to see though! No pressure.